添削（ひなさん）

If I had a time machine, I could go into the future. There are two reasons for this. First, it allows me to see how I would lead life in the future. For example, what do I do ? , who do marry me ?_,and what life would be different From today. I’m very interested in my future. Also, I may change my life to see my future. Although I disappointed about my future which don’t expect, I believe that I can manage to change it into my ideal life. Therefore, if I had a time machine, I could choice the way to go into the future.

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If I had a time machine, I could go to the future.

There are two reasons for this.

First, it would allow me to see how I would lead my life in the future.

For example, what I would do, whom I would marry, and how my life would be different from today.

I am very interested in my future.

Also, I may change my life by seeing my future.

Although I might be disappointed about a future that I did not expect, I believe that I could manage to change it into my ideal life.

Therefore, if I had a time machine, I would choose to go to the future.

■ go to the future

go to + 場所 の基本構文

“go into” は場所の「内部に入る」意味なので不適切。

■ lead my life

“lead life” ではなく “lead my life” と所有格が必要。

■ 間接疑問文の語順

what I would do

whom I would marry

→ “疑問詞 + 主語 + 動詞” の語順。

■ marry の語法

marry + 人（目的語）

→ who do marry me? は語順誤り。

■ how my life would be different from today

“different from” の前置詞の定型

コンマで区切る列挙の一部として整理。

■ 仮定法過去「If I had〜, I would〜」

文全体で仮定法過去を使用。

could と would の使い分け：許可・可能性→could／意志→would。

■ past that I did not expect

関係代名詞のルール（先行詞：a future）

関係代名詞の後は S + V が必要。

■ choose のスペル

choice（名詞）と choose（動詞）の混同

正しくは would choose。

■ by seeing my future

change A by doing：手段を表す。